Thursday, January 22, 2015

My Christmas Break

 I had a really good Christmas break. I did not sleep all the time, nor I stayed home all the time. My birthday was the second day of the break, and that was the first time I had a birthday party since I came to Webb. I used to be on the plane when my birthday came. So I was really excited that I could have a birthday party in Beijing. 
  I also went shopping because girls always feel like they don't have enough clothes to wear. So I went shopping with my mother, and I was really happy. 
  I had a really wonderful dinner with my violin teacher and his wife. They were so nice, and I really like being with them.
  I also bought a lot of books because I thought I was lack of real knowledge. 
  It was a really wonderful and relaxing break!!!

3 comments:

  1. That's right! You guys had a birthday! Happy belated birthday!
    14/20

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  2. That's right! You guys had a birthday! Happy belated birthday!
    14/20

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  3. Pretty good. See my corrections in CAPS. Getting there! Almost perfect. 15/20

    I had a really good Christmas break. I did not sleep THE WHOLE time, nor DID I STAY home THE WHOLE time. My birthday was the second day of the break, and IT was the first time I HAVE HAD a birthday party since I came to Webb. I used to be on the plane when my birthday came. So I was really excited that I could have a birthday party in Beijing.
    I also went shopping because girls always feel like they don't have enough clothes to wear. So, (COMMA) I went shopping with my mother, and I was really happy.
    I had a really wonderful dinner with my violin teacher and his wife. They were so nice, and I really like being with them.
    I also bought a lot of books because I thought I was LACKING real knowledge.
    It was a really wonderful and relaxing break!!!

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